My Film
My Film
17 Hours
Till
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Narrative Stage |
What Happens In My
Film |
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Equilibrium |
British soldiers on a
foot patrol in Afghanistan working to tackle terror factions and keep locals safe in their homes. Nothing abnormal happening. They are travelling
through mountainous, dry land toward a Forward Operating Base about 12km out.
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Disruption |
After travelling a
good 7km, the soldiers spot a figure on one of the many hills. 1 turned into 2,
into 3, into 4. ‘Section, Halt’ the Corporal ordered. The soldiers squinted
and strained their eyes as one got out a pair of binoculars. ‘Lads get down, I
think that’s a Taliban soldi-' |
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Recognition of disruption |
The Corporal gave the
section the orders to fire. They dug into the hill and opened up on the Taliban
soldiers. Each round fired painting trauma into their minds permanently. |
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Attempt to solve
disruption |
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New equilibrium |
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Excellent Jed - I liked the storyboard on SMHW too. I would just add that most of the New Equilibrium is actually still the attempt to resolve section. The last two sentences would be the NE.
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